Improvements to my coursework

Haven spoken to Mrs Dolby during one of our lessons, I recieved a list of improvments that I could add to my coursework to improve the amount of marks I achieve:

• I need to look at the industry and audience in more detail - potentially create to more presentations on prezi, as this is a good way of me presenting the research that I have put in. 
• I need to go over a couple of sections about the music industry and produce more presentations and blogs to show that I have put in effort to research more into the industry.